“Zane it’s just a tear I don’t need new clothes!” Bland yelped. “But it’s a big one. And I want to play dress up.” Zane pouted a bit as his tendrils held up a bunch of dresses. “You fit these things right?” He asked. Bland jumped a bit. “h-how did you get those?” “Your closet duh!” Zane said happily. “Now come on~” Bland stepped back. “N-no.” He turned around and started running with Zane running after him.
“…shouldn’t we help Bland?” Strawberry asked. “Let’s wait a bit.” Alistair said while watching Bland barely dodge a tendril. “This is fun to watch.” Strawberry sighed.
“Zane it’s just a tear I don’t need new clothes!” Bland yelped.
“But it’s a big one. And I want to play dress up.” Zane pouted a bit as his tendrils held up a bunch of dresses. “You fit these things right?” He asked.
Bland jumped a bit. “h-how did you get those?”
“Your closet duh!” Zane said happily. “Now come on~”
Bland stepped back. “N-no.” He turned around and started running with Zane running after him.
“…shouldn’t we help Bland?” Strawberry asked.
“Let’s wait a bit.” Alistair said while watching Bland barely dodge a tendril. “This is fun to watch.”
Strawberry sighed.
Not trying to offend your writing in any way, but that will help, especially is something is heavy in dialogue.